My one and only poem...what do ya think? I know I'm not much of a poet...xP

Apon that Tree

As I looked upon my Savior

Bleeding on that tree

I wondered why he loved me

So much he'd die for me

I had betrayed him

So many times before

My sins had put him there

On his brow a crown of thorns

Beat into his Holy flesh

Were nails

In his hands

In his feet

His hands out stretched

Out stretched on that cross

For me

Oh Why would he do such a thing?

For someone such as me?

A sinner

Cheater

Liar

Hater

Oh why was he on that cross

When the real criminal was me?

His Holy flesh was beaten and torn

While mine was being washed clean

With his blood

Flowing beneath the tree

He washed me clean

Why, oh why did he do this?

Because he loves you

And me

Yea, so that's it. Please honestly tell me what you think of it, what I should change, etc...

Thanks!

Mikayla